About Filsafat 17 tahun

First of all i lke to thanks to anybody that download my first story, I've got mixed comments about htat but I sad thank you to apreciate my work.

1. The story it's about my alter ego, Bagus. Yeah, that's his mind. So it's a true Story
2.Maybe we shuould call it prologue than short story because there's no conflict on it
3. I made it when I was 17

well that's all, if you stil dont download it click here, it's in Bahasa.